write by wongtsinghsu.

不得不拜倒在宫部阿姑的笔下,她居然有这个耐心花一百多万字来写这么“简单”的一个案子。看完之后俺感觉“靠就说了这么个事”,又好像“什么事都说了”。
右上方那张是人物关系图,她把所有的人物家庭背景全部不厌其烦地描述一通,光是记人名就几乎是一场灾难。她一贯就是以大量细节和心理描写全面压垮读者和评委。不知道有谁是一字不拉地看完——本人就是完败给她了只好快进结束——还得擦掉嘴角的鲜血忍痛对她说一句:你牛比你骄傲。
没人有这个耐性模仿她吧。

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